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May 30, 2013
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Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D800
Shutter Speed
1/320 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
90 mm
ISO Speed
640
Date Taken
May 30, 2013, 6:05:14 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows)
Sensor Size
12mm
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Libelle by sarahbuhr Libelle by sarahbuhr
Full view please :)

:camera:: Nikon D800
Tamron AF 90mm 2,8 Di Macro 1:1 SP
no Flash


Comments, critiques and favourites are always appreciated! :heart:

edit 28.8.13: add watermark


Please do not use my images without my permission!
Sarah Buhr, all rights reserved.
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:icongwam-rock:
If there's anything I love it's photographs of insects. Especially close-ups like these. Dragonflies are also among my favorite insects, so I like this photo quite a bit.

So now opinions aside the photo has good composition balance. It keeps the focal point on the dragonfly while still including some other elements for the eye to wander on. The stem in the middle slices the composition into two sides, with some other wheat or barley plant on the other side to make the viewer aware of the setting. The colors are also very attractive, and how the light dances between the hairs of the dragonfly gives a very nice feeling. The whole photograph has a nice, soft feeling.

That being said, it might be too soft. The whole photo looks as if it had some photoshop filter applied to it. It doesn't look bad, but compromises the impact that the photo could have had. Soft light and unfocused imagery looks fine, even great as a singularity but there's too much blurry empty space for me to get an impression of anything. When I first saw it I first thought it was a painting, which is fine but photography is great because it can capture such wonderful detail. This would have made a wonderful painting, but as a photograph it seems confused. Obviously it doesn't ruin the whole photo, even with the blur there's a good sense of depth, but some parts could have been put more into focus. The end of the tail can be blurry and still look good, but it seems too blurry. It's hard to find that balance, since such an element can only be discerned subjectively.

The photograph is good, but it lacks impact. Not every piece needs to be a masterpiece, and it's even good to experiment like this. Needless to say there is definitely a good artist behind this camera judging from the composition. In fact the composition is probably the best thing in this photo, and an eye for composition is the most important thing to a photographer. I think what needs to be done to this photo is to let the photo do a little more of the work and touch it up less.
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:iconjorgequeiros:
JorgeQueiros Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great shot! ;)
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:iconturqoose:
Turqoose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Student General Artist
lovely colors and composition (: lovely shot
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:iconsarahbuhr:
sarahbuhr Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you :heart:
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:iconnature-addict:
Nature-Addict Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Absolutely wonderful shot! I agree with the critique and wish the bottom part was in focus, but I can only imagine how difficult of a shot this was to get on its own! Very well done.
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:iconsarahbuhr:
sarahbuhr Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you :) It really was not easy. It was windy and quite dark. So I had to shoot with F2.8. :/
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calimer00 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
Geniales Makro
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:iconsarahbuhr:
sarahbuhr Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
danke :)
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littleconfusion Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
love it! colors are amazing :D
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:iconsarahbuhr:
sarahbuhr Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
<3
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